They do the same thing as buddists do.

2018-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is holiday that is Buddist's birthday. I have heard radio from morning because I have nothing to do. And public library is off the day today,too. I am resting at home after driving a motor cycle around my hometown. The street is idle and a few peolpe is seen. Maybe, the people may go to the resort area. Today is sunny. The broadcasting weather forecast says it will rain afternoon, but it is not rain even now. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]!


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!

Jean



Today is holiday that is Buddist\'s birthday.

>> Today is a holiday celebration for Buddha\'s birthday.


 I have heard radio from morning because I have nothing to do.

>> I have been listening to the radio since morning because I have nothing to do.


 And public library is off the day today,too.

>> Also, the public library is on a holiday as well.


 I am resting at home after driving a motor cycle around my hometown.

>> I am resting at home after driving a motorbike around my hometown.


 The street is idle and a few peolpe is seen.

>> The usually busy streets are empty of traffic and people.


 Maybe, the people may go to the resort area. Today is sunny.

>> Maybe some people went to the beach or the resort to enjoy the sunny weather.


 The broadcasting weather forecast says it will rain afternoon, but it is not rain even now.

>>  According to the weather forecast, it will rain in the afternoon, but it\'s still sunny.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: I appreciate your reading my composition. Cheers! 

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