They say exercise helps improve mood. How? Write at least 5 sentences on how exercising can improve
학생이 쓴 원문
They say exercise helps improve mood. How? Write at least 5 sentences on how exercising can improve one\'s mood or feelings.
First, if you exercise a lot, your body will make andorpin, which is let person happier than before. This feeling can helpful when you need to think creative things.
Second, you may get routine. Having a routine can make you have a balanced life. Regular exercise is difficult to keep on, so if you stay this routine like exercising, you can feel happier and braver.
For example, When I was in Korea, I usually do running. After Running about 30 minutes, I can feel my andorpin is running.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] Su!
I can see you did some research regarding our topic. Thank you and I really appreciate that. Continue learning and doing your best. Great Job!
-T. Caitlyn
They say exercise helps improve mood. How?
>>CORRECT
Write at least 5 sentences on how exercising can improve one\'s mood or feelings.
>>CORRECT
First, if you exercise a lot, your body will make andorpin, which is let person happier than before.
First, if you exercise a lot, your body will make andorpin, which is let person happier than before.
>>First, If you exercise, your body produces endorphins which makes a person happier than before.
This feeling can helpful when you need to think creative things.
>>This feeling is helpful when you want to be creative.
Second, you may get routine.
Second, you may get routine.
>>Second, you can make a routine.
Having a routine can make you have a balanced life.
>>Having a routine can balance your life.
Regular exercise is difficult to keep on, so if you stay this routine like exercising, you can feel happier and braver.
>>Exercising regularly is difficult but having a routine can help you and make you feel happier and braver.
For example, When I was in Korea, I usually do running.
For example, When I was in Korea, I usually do running.
>>For example, when I was in Korea, I usually go for runs.
After Running about 30 minutes, I can feel my andorpin is running.
>>After running for about 30 minutes, I can tell that endorphins are released because I feel happier and better.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.