They say that nothing will make you happy unless you decide to be happy. Looking back at your life a

2016-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Looking back at my life, and ask myself if I feel happy, I would like to say yes. As you mention on the question, I also agree with that my decision will influence on my happiness. The more we have gratitute and positive personality, the more we feel happy. If I looking back at my life before, I tried to be positive and felt a lot of happiness. Therefore I feel happy when I looking back at my life.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

It\'s good to hear from you.

How are you? ^^,


Thank you for sparing a bit of your time to do your homework. ^^,

It\'s good to know that you feel happy about your life. :)

Being happy is a choice.

Despite all the problems that we encounter everyday in our life, it\'s our choice to be happy and take things positively. ^^,


I would love to hear from you again later in class.

Take care [이름]! :)


--- Teacher Jacey :)



Looking back at my life, and ask myself if I feel happy, I would like to say yes.

>> Looking back at my life and asking myself if I feel happy, I would like to say yes.



As you mention on the question, I also agree with that my decision will influence on my happiness.

>> As what you have mentioned in the question, I also agree that my decisions have an influence on my happiness.

OR

As what you have mentioned in the question, I also agree that my decisions influence my happiness.



The more we have gratitute and positive personality, the more we feel happy.

>> The more that we have gratitude and a positive personality, the more we feel happy.



If I looking back at my life before, I tried to be positive and felt a lot of happiness.

>> Looking back at my life before, I tried to be positive and I felt a lot of happiness.

OR

Looking back at the life I\'ve lived before, I tried to be positive and I felt happy.



Therefore I feel happy when I looking back at my life.

>> Therefore, I feel happy when I look back at my life.

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