They say that nothing will make you happy unless you decide to be happy. Looking back at your life a
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Hi [이름]! :)
It\'s good to hear from you.
How are you? ^^,
Thank you for sparing a bit of your time to do your homework. ^^,
It\'s good to know that you feel happy about your life. :)
Being happy is a choice.
Despite all the problems that we encounter everyday in our life, it\'s our choice to be happy and take things positively. ^^,
I would love to hear from you again later in class.
Take care [이름]! :)
--- Teacher Jacey :)
Looking back at my life, and ask myself if I feel happy, I would like to say yes.
>> Looking back at my life and asking myself if I feel happy, I would like to say yes.
As you mention on the question, I also agree with that my decision will influence on my happiness.
>> As what you have mentioned in the question, I also agree that my decisions have an influence on my happiness.
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As what you have mentioned in the question, I also agree that my decisions influence my happiness.
The more we have gratitute and positive personality, the more we feel happy.
>> The more that we have gratitude and a positive personality, the more we feel happy.
If I looking back at my life before, I tried to be positive and felt a lot of happiness.
>> Looking back at my life before, I tried to be positive and I felt a lot of happiness.
OR
Looking back at the life I\'ve lived before, I tried to be positive and I felt happy.
Therefore I feel happy when I looking back at my life.
>> Therefore, I feel happy when I look back at my life.
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