They seem to be abusing it.

2023-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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They seem to be abusing it. Our laws have created new laws, and only politicians can hang banners anywhere without permission. The law raised eyebrows at banners on the street, and accidents caused by banners began to occur at crosswalks. Nevertheless, the banner could not be removed, and several people were sued for trying to remove it. So I can\'t see politicians very well. I take their abuse of power seriously.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름],

I want to express my gratitude for your diligence in completing your homework. Your response about taking the abuse of power seriously shows great thoughtfulness and understanding. Your commitment to addressing important issues like this is truly commendable. Keep up the excellent work and continue to apply your thoughtful insights in everything you do. Thank you for your hard work, and I\'m proud to have you as my student.

~Teacher Cathy

 

They seem to be abusing it.

>>CORRECT

OR>> They appear to be taking advantage of it.
Our laws have created new laws, and only politicians can hang banners anywhere without permission.

>>CORRECT

OR>> New laws were made because of the existing laws, and now only politicians can hang banners wherever they want without asking.
The law raised eyebrows at banners on the street, and accidents caused by banners began to occur at crosswalks.

>>The new law raised eyebrows due to banners on the street, and accidents caused by banners started to occur at crosswalks.
Nevertheless, the banner could not be removed, and several people were sued for trying to remove it.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Nevertheless, the banner could not be removed, and several people were sued for attempting to remove it.
So I can\'t see politicians very well.

>>So, I can\'t see politicians in a very positive light.
I take their abuse of power seriously.

>>CORRECT

OR>> Their abuse of power is something I take seriously.

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