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Hello. ^^ I hope that even though you are having some problems there, you are still having a good time.

I admire you for being focused in learning and you know how to deal with those situations.

I think some people want to go on a party to relieve their stress.

You are doing great in our classes and also in writing.

Let us talk more about this in class.
Teacher Nina

Should students who commit cyberbullying be suspended from school?

I don\'t have any experiences about cyberbullying but I know that

>> Correct

>> OR: I haven\'t experienced cyber bullying but I know it.
Bullying is not good.

>> Correct

It\'s like a crime which is initiative.

>> It\'s like a crime which is done intentionally.
So, If we don\'t suspend or scold them, they would be more aggressive and more furious.

>> Correct

I know that students bullying became a gangsters or prostitutes.

>> Did you mean: I know that students who are bullying others are gangsters or prostitutes.
They are able to be a factor of crime.

>> Did you mean: They can be a suspect for the crime.

>> OR: They are the ones responsible for such crime.

Probably they are the roots of the crime.

>> Correct
Whether they did it unconsciously or not they should be punished by rule.

>> Whether they did it unconsciously or not they should be punished by law.

Because of the dirty circumstances, I wanted to go out and book other accommodation which of the cost of is too expensive to afford it.

>> Because of the dirty place, I want to go out and book other accommodation but the cost is too expensive.

that\'s why I stay here.

>> Correct

>> OR: That\'s the reason why I am here.

Of course there are lot\'s of people who are in same situation with mine.

>> Correct

>> OR: Of course, there are a lot of people who are experiencing the same.

Everyone wants to reduce their expenditure.

>> Correct
One day, one of the students in my class asked all of students that \"Shall we have a party tonight?\". I said no.

>> One day, one of the students in my class asked all of the students, \"Shall we party tonight?\" and I refused.

>> OR: One day, one of the students in my class asked all of the students, \"Let\'s party tonight\'?\" and I said, \"No\".

I think it would be an wasting money.

>> I think it would be a waste of money.
I don\'t understand why we have a party even we met a minute ago.

>> I don\'t understand why do we need to have a party even if we met a minute ago.