They will suffer some physical problems.
학생이 쓴 원문
They may become a disabled person so they can not work properly at the company with others.
Korea only have a storm in summer as a natural disaster.
Storms in Korea are accompanied by strong rain and wind, but they do not cause direct damage to humans.
In the movie of TV I can see storm scene.
It is very cool.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
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They may become a disabled person so they can not work properly at the company with others.
>> They may be disabled and they can\'t work properly.
>> They may be disabled and they can\'t work properly.
Korea only have a storm in summer as a natural disaster.
>> Typhoons strike Korea in the summer season.
>> Typhoons strike Korea in the summer season.
Storms in Korea are accompanied by strong rain and wind, but they do not cause direct damage to humans.
>> Storms in Korea are accompanied by strong rains and wind, but they do not cause direct damage to humans.
In the movie of TV I can see storm scene.
>> I\'ve seen some storm scenes on TV.
>> I\'ve seen some storm scenes on TV.
It is very cool.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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