Thing that annoys me the most
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Hunger annoys me the most. I can endure most of things but I feel really bad when I’m hungry. It’s okay if I can eat foods but when I’m on a diet it annoys me a lot. Every time I’m on a diet I realize food is really important thing to us.
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Hunger annoys me the most.
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I can endure most of things but I feel really bad when I’m hungry.
>>CORRECT
It’s okay if I can eat foods but when I’m on a diet it annoys me a lot.
>>CORRECT
Every time I’m on a diet I realize food is really important thing to us
>>Every time I’m on a diet, I realize that food is really important to us
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