Things go wrong

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As you know, I\'m in charge of exporting and importing chemical item.
>> Correct.

But these days, I got many chores since my superior transferred to me.
>> But these days, I have a lot of chores since my superior transferred me.

she was on a leave to got her hometown last week, I also had to work that she gave on behalf of her.
>> she was on a leave to go back to her hometown last week, I also had to work on behalf of her.

First of all, I calculated cost for tank we\'ve rented and owned, and input on the enterprise resource planning system.
>> First of all, I calculated the total cost of the tank that we\'ve rented and owned, and input it on the enterprise resource planning system.

 I made a mistake few time. Not only I do it first, but also enter the number correctly. Because it\'s very complicated that we revise if it\'s incorrect.
>>  I made a few mistakes, Not only on the first time, but also in entering the number correctly. Because it\'s very complicated that we have to revise if it\'s incorrect.

I\'m also in charge of purchasing IBC drum that we\'ve never stored up chemicals before.
>> Correct.

I\'m so busy that I can\'t have a plenty of time to do another important work, such as getting a quotation from manufacturer.
>> Correct.

 But I\'ve seen the finance division was severely driven a deadline every end of month.
>> But I\'ve seen the finance division and they were severely driven by a deadline every end of the month.

Thankfully, I could got home on time usually. I feel happy when I spend some quality time with my wife after I came home early. 
>> Thankfully, I could got home on time like the usual. I feel happy whenever I spend some quality time with my wife after coming home early.