Things that come to my mind when I hear the word “rice”.
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When I hear the word “rice” I become hungry and food that my mom mades are comes to my mind. Maybe because I’m on a diet so I feel really hungry and craving for food. But the rice is not good for a diet so I didn’t eat for a few days. I hope I can eat rice soon.
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When I hear the word “rice” I become hungry and food that my mom mades are comes to my mind.
>> When I hear the word “rice” I become hungry and I think of the food that my mom makes.
Maybe because I’m on a diet so I feel really hungry and craving for food.
>> Maybe because I’m on a diet so I feel really hungry and crave for food.
But the rice is not good for a diet so I didn’t eat for a few days.
>> Rice is not good for my diet so I don\'t eat it often.
I hope I can eat rice soon.
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