Things that I’m proud in my life
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I’m proud of my personality in my life. My parents gave me love during I grown up. They always support me so I can experience a lot of things. But they didn’t help me a lot when I have to solve some problems. I taught myself how to overcome hardship. Maybe because of these things now I’m kind of independent person but I know how to love and accept things. So I’m satisfied and proud of my personality.
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I’m proud of my personality in my life.
>> I\'m proud of my personality in life.
My parents gave me love during I grown up.
>> My parents gave me nothing but love as I was growing up.
They always support me so I can experience a lot of things.
>> CORRECT
But they didn’t help me a lot when I have to solve some problems.
>> Although, they didn\'t help me a lot when it comes to problem solving.
I taught myself how to overcome hardship.
>>CORRECT
Maybe because of these things now I’m kind of independent person but I know how to love and accept things.
>>Maybe because of these things now I’m kind of an independent person becauseI know how to love and accept things.
So I’m satisfied and proud of my personality.
>>CORRECT
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