Think about a time when you helped someone. Describe the situation and how you felt afterward.
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Few month ago, I helped old woman in a donut store. she didn\'t know how to use auto order machine so, she asked me to help her.
I teached her how to use machine.
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Hey [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your opinion on this matter. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Few month ago, I helped old woman in a donut store.
>> A few months ago, I encountered an elderly woman in a donut store who was struggling to use the automated ordering machine.
she didn\'t know how to use auto order machine so, she asked me to help her.
>> Seeing her confusion, she approached me for assistance.
I teached her how to use machine.
>> I gladly helped her by teaching her how to use the machine effectively.
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