think about good teammate(1)

2010-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Min

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At last, I became a 4th year university student. I think that time certainly flies. I often feel anxiety and emtiness. I can't afford to enjoy with my friend. Because I have to plan my long life planning right now. Usually I think many things. job, future, marriage and so on.. especially, I focus my future job. If I'm a leader in a group project and I have a right to [이름]ose applicants. I'll select this type people.

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At last, I became a 4th year university student. >>Correct. I think that time certainly flies. I often feel anxiety and emtiness. >>Correct. But please check the spelling of ‘emptiness’ and you may add ‘time certainly flies (very fast).I can't afford to enjoy with my friend. >>Correct. Because I have to plan my long life planning right now. >>Because I have to plan for my future now. Usually I think many things. job, future, marriage and so on..especially, I focus my future job. >>Usually, I think about many things like my job, my future and marriage. But for now, I focus on my future job. If I'm a leader in a group project and I have a right to [이름]ose applicants. I'll select this type people. >> If I'm a leader in a group project and I have a right to [이름]ose applicants, I'll select this type of people. (This sentence is a little vague. Do you mean about people who are focused on their jobs?^^)

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