think about good teammate(3)

2010-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Min

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From among the group members, person, having a leadership, have to mediate between the members and company. 3. socialability This character is very important paint. If you are included something specific group, because we can't act without socialability In a group project, cooperation memberis nothing to sneeze. And group members that constructs good teamwork will succeed their purpose surely(certainly)

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1. PERCEPTIVENESS Sometimes, we can't insight the remote future. >>Sometimes, we can't predict the remote/distant future. At this time, If a perceptive person belongs to our group.It'll be very useful. because he or she can expect a business forecast. >>In this case, if a perceptive person belongs to our group, he/she will be very useful because he/she can make a business forecast.   2. LEADERSHIP Even though I'm a leader in the group I can't know team member's thought or complaint carefully. >>Even though I'm the leader of the group, I am not well aware of my team members?thought and complaints. After that, there'll be much possible to explode dissatisfactions. from among the group members, >>This might cause an increasing dissatisfaction among my group members.person, having a leadership, have to mediate between the membersand company. >>A person who has to mediate between the members/employees and the company has to have leadership skill. >>As the leader, a person has to mediate between the members/employees and the company   3. SOCIABLENESS (noun) ?adjective: sociable This character is very important paint. >>This character is very important. >>This trait is very important. If you are included something specific group, because we can't act without socialability. >>If you are included in a particular group, you can't act/work without being sociable.In a group project, cooperation member is nothing to sneeze. >>In a group project, cooperation among members is nothing to sneeze at. And group members that constructs good teamwork will succeed their purpose surely(certainly) >>And group members who construct/show good teamwork will certainly/surely succeed in their purpose/goal.

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