think about good teammate(3)
학생이 쓴 원문
From among the group members,
person, having a leadership, have to mediate between the members
and company.
3. socialability
This character is very important paint. If you are included something
specific group, because we can't act without socialability
In a group project, cooperation memberis nothing to sneeze.
And group members that constructs good teamwork will succeed their
purpose surely(certainly)
강사 첨삭
1. PERCEPTIVENESS
Sometimes, we can't insight the remote future.
>>Sometimes, we can't predict the remote/distant future.
At this time, If a perceptive person belongs to our group.It'll be very useful. because he or she can expect a business forecast.
>>In this case, if a perceptive person belongs to our group, he/she will be very useful because he/she can make a business forecast.
2. LEADERSHIP Even though I'm a leader in the group I can't know team member's thought or complaint carefully.
>>Even though I'm the leader of the group, I am not well aware of my team members?thought and complaints. After that, there'll be much possible to explode dissatisfactions. from among the group members,
>>This might cause an increasing dissatisfaction among my group members.person, having a leadership, have to mediate between the membersand company.
>>A person who has to mediate between the members/employees and the company has to have leadership skill.
>>As the leader, a person has to mediate between the members/employees and the company
3. SOCIABLENESS (noun) ?adjective: sociable This character is very important paint.
>>This character is very important.
>>This trait is very important.
If you are included something specific group, because we can't act without socialability.
>>If you are included in a particular group, you can't act/work without being sociable.In a group project, cooperation member is nothing to sneeze.
>>In a group project, cooperation among members is nothing to sneeze at. And group members that constructs good teamwork will succeed their purpose surely(certainly)
>>And group members who construct/show good teamwork will certainly/surely succeed in their purpose/goal.
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