Think about something bad that happened to you, but taught you something. Write about this experienc

Hi there [이름] ^^

I enjoyed reading your story about how you met your girlfriend. I am so happy to hear that after all the bad things that happened to you, ended up being happy with your girlfriend. Thank you for sharing a wonderful story of your life. ^^

See you in our next class. Have a good day! ^^

~~Teacher Heidi

I think that all of experience whether good things or bad things are important to me.

>> My experiences whether good or bad are important to me.

When I was 14, I came to China with my brother for studying.

>> When I was 14 years old I went to China with my brother to study.

And some people were cheating us, and my parents for money it\'s a bad experience to me.

>> Some people cheated us out of money and it was really a bad experience for me.

Because I was little bit young to suffer that experience.

>> I was too young  to suffer from that experience.

And I became stronger than before.

>> I became stronger.

And when I was 18, a cute girl was assigned to sit next to me in class.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> When I was 18 years old, I met a cute girl and we became seatmates in class.

And I had a big crush on her, But she thought me just a friend.

>> I had a crush on her but she just considered me as a friend

So I kept my love secret for keeping friendship until graduating from high school.

>> So I kept my feelings for the sake of our friendship.

I want to be more handsome, and want to appeal to her, so I tried to work out everyday for 6 month.

>> I wanted to be more handsome and to look more appealing to her so I worked out everyday for 6 months.

Finally I became much better than before.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Finally, I looked better than before.

And I declared my love for her, but result was horrible.

>> I admitted my feelings to her but the result was heartbreaking.

I was really shocked, but I try to be more attractive man persistently.

>> I was really shocked but I continued to make myself better .

In the end, it gradually moved her heart, and she accepted my love, and became my girlfriend.

>> Eventually, she also fell in love with me and she became my girlfriend.

If she is a person who fall in love easily, we would break up easily.

>> If she was the kind of person who falls in love easily, we will probably break up easily.