Think about that in almost everything.

Hello, [이름]! 

Great job on your homework. I like how you expressed your feelings about buying things when you’re stressed. It shows your honesty and self-reflection. One thing you could improve is using more descriptive words to make your writing richer. Also, try to use complete sentences to make your thoughts clearer. Instead of “I am happy to relieve my stress like that,” you could say, “I feel happy when I buy something to relieve my stress.” Keep up the good work, see you later! ^^

~Teacher Cathy 

I tend to buy things when I\'m stressed out. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I often purchase things when I\'m feeling stressed. 

So now that I think about it, there are quite a few useless things in the room. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Now that I think about it, there are quite a few things in the room that seem useless. 

However, I am happy to relieve my stress like that, so I keep it as a memory of my immature enemy. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>However, I am happy to relieve my stress in that way, so I keep it as a memory of my immature enemy.