Think of a place that makes you feel relaxed and peaceful. Describe it and explain why it is relaxin

Happy Thursday to you Sir [이름]!

Wow! I want to go hiking this weekend. Hihihi.

You are right! It is really relaxing to visit such quiet places.

It is where we can sit on the grass, eat something while looking at the sky.

What a wonderful feeling. ^^

I hope that you could go there this weekend.

See you in class.

Teacher Nina

The place that makes me feel relaxed and peaceful is narrow walking trails in the forest.

>> Better: The place that makes me feel relaxed and peaceful is the narrow walking trails in the forest.

It shouldn’t be covered by concrete, but remains untouched and be surrounded by nature.

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When I was younger, I didn’t feel anything when hiking such trails.

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However, when I’m getting older, I’m eager to visit such natural places to feel comfortable, relaxed and peaceful.

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It is probably because I’m sick and tired of living in the big and crowed city.

>> It is probably because I’m sick and tired of living in the big and crowded city.

We all bump into people wherever you go in our every day life, breathe polluted air, and suffer from the hustle and bustle in the big city.

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We as a human being are born from nature and return to nature after all.

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But we live in places that are artificially constructed.

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It is quite irony that we develop our environment to make our life easier and more convenient, however, we look forward to visiting undeveloped places and returning to nature in the end.

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I sometimes think that all the developments go against the god’s will.

>> I sometimes think that all the developments go against  God’s will.