Thinking about Easter
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know about Easter in English and specific what I do that day.
I think Easter is celebrated in Christianity or Catholicism in Korea.
I\'m not Christian or Catholic. So, I don\'t know well about that day.
But, I know only one thing is that Easter day is celebrated the resurrection of Jesus and people eat some eggs.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
Make sure that your sentences are balanced.
Take into consideration the idea in your sentence.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t know about Easter in English and specific what I do that day.
>> I don\'t know much about Easter in English or specifically what I do on that day.
I think Easter is celebrated in Christianity or Catholicism in Korea.
I think Easter is celebrated in Christianity or Catholicism in Korea.
>> I think Easter is celebrated in Christianity or Catholicism in Korea.
I\'m not Christian or Catholic. So, I don\'t know well about that day.
I\'m not Christian or Catholic. So, I don\'t know well about that day.
>> I\'m neither Christian nor Catholic, so I don\'t know much about that day.
But, I know only one thing is that Easter day is celebrated the resurrection of Jesus and people eat some eggs.
But, I know only one thing is that Easter day is celebrated the resurrection of Jesus and people eat some eggs.
>> However, the one thing I do know is that Easter celebrates the resurrection of Jesus, and people eat eggs.
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