Thinking about myself.
학생이 쓴 원문
I thanking about myself
I want to live pocus for this.
When I want to be something then I do and I will.
So most importantthing is what I want to be.
And try to do that.
I want to be that person who is continue developing each day and everyday of every direction.
I hope to do some love and lovee.
I have fulling pleasure and courage more then fear.
When I want to get something, I willing to challenge for that and I must to clinch.
I am full of energy women with patiencely, passionate.
I hope to helped poor neighbor with a sweet charismatic leader.
I Wanna be a person who is everyone wanna be my friend.
Peple works best when you feel happy and confident I thank.
So I will always be confident fully self-respect and I wanna be intellectual women with sagacious.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
I think you are really eager to improve your skills and yourself, as well.
Good luck with that! You can do it! See you!
-T. Joanna
I thanking about myself
>> I am thinking about myself.
I want to live pocus for this.
>> I really want to focus on myself.
When I want to be something then I do and I will.
>> If I want to do something, I really do it.
So most importantthing is what I want to be.
>> And that is why I consider the most important things to be done first.
And try to do that.
>> I try to do those necessary things.
I want to be that person who is continue developing each day and everyday of every direction.
>> I want to be the person who continues to develop every day.
I hope to do some love and lovee.
>> I hope to do the things that I love.
I have fulling pleasure and courage more then fear.
>> I have the feeling of courage than fear.
When I want to get something, I willing to challenge for that and I must to clinch.
>> When I want to get something, I take a risk and take the challenge.
I am full of energy women with patiencely, passionate.
>> I am a wman of energy, patience, and compassion.
I hope to helped poor neighbor with a sweet charismatic leader.
>> I like to help the less fortunate people around me with my utmost abilities.
I Wanna be a person who is everyone wanna be my friend.
>> I want to be the person who can befriend everybody.
Peple works best when you feel happy and confident I thank.
>> Indeed, people who work best feel happy.
So I will always be confident fully self-respect and I wanna be intellectual women with sagacious
>> So I always feel confident about my self because I am very eager to be a vey intellectual woman.
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