Thinking of me
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do you care about what others think of you? I think I care about what others think of me because of my personality. But, nowadays I am concerned about what other people think of me less than before.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I think I care about what others think of me because of my personality.
>> Correct
But, nowadays I am concerned about what other people think of me less than before.
>> Correct
OR >> However, nowadays, I am less concerned about what other people think of me than before.
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