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Telling with topic about intelligence is difficult for me because i didn\'t think about it carefully.

>> Talking about intelligence is difficult for me because I didn\'t think about it carefully.
 Umm.. I think, Once i want to improve it, I have to read many books such as politic, economic, culture and society.

>> I think, if I want to improve it, I have to read many books related to politics, economics, culture and society.
 These books contain much common knowledge.

>> These books contain many information.
 By reading these, I can learn a lot of things through them.

>> correct!
 Moreover, watching  news every day is one of the best ways to increase it.

>> Moreover, watching the news every day is one of the best way to increase it.
 Also, by watching news I can know many issues occurring in our society.

>> correct!
 Finally, debating with topic improves my intelligence.

>> Finally, debating with different topics can improve my intelligence.
 Because debate conveys my thought to counterparts and he tell me his thought too. 

>> Because debate conveys my thoughts to my counterpart and he can tell me his thoughts too.

OR>> Debate can strengthen my communication skills.
 By exchanging many opinions each other, I can increase my intelligence.

>> By exchanging our opinion, I can increase my intelligence.