thirteenth homework
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Kimchi is so popular that Korean people usually use Kimchi to cook the dishes.
There are a few cuisines using Kimchi.
one of them is Kimchi soup that Korean people can easily enjoy everywhere.
Method cooking it is very simple because It needs only a few ingredients.
Bulgogi also is very known to foreigners.
To eat it deliciously, we have to prepare curry.
Balance Bulgogi and curry is so good!
Method is simple.
We first have to make curry and then only put Bulgogi on it.
Now, all we have to do is eating it!!
The last thing is Bibimbab.
Method making it is so simple.
All ingredient I want to eat have to put in bowl and then mix them.
Isn't it easy?
Do you have any recommendation for philippine food for me?
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I love kimchi, bibimbap and Tteokbokki (spicy rice cake). Yummy! If you come to the Philippines, you should try Adobo( this could be chicken or pork adobo or mix), Lechon ( roasted pig) , Sinigang (sour meat stew), and for dessert Halo Halo.
~T. Lynn
Kimchi is so popular that Korean people usually use Kimchi to cook the dishes.
>> Kimchi is so popular that Korean people usually use Kimchi to cook different dishes.
There are a few cuisines using Kimchi.
>> There are a few dishes using kimchi.
One of them is Kimchi soup that Korean people can easily enjoy everywhere.
>> correct!
Method cooking it is very simple because It needs only a few ingredients.
>> The method of cooking is very simple because it needs only a few ingredients.
Bulgogi also is very known to foreigners.
>> Bulgogi is also well-known to foreigners.
OR>> Bulgogi is also famous to foreigners.
To eat it deliciously, we have to prepare curry.
>> correct!
Balance Bulgogi and curry is so good!
>> The balance between bulgogi and curry is very good.
Method is simple.
>> The cooking procedure is very simple.
We first have to make curry and then only put Bulgogi on it.
>> First, we have to make curry then put bulgogi on it.
Now, all we have to do is eating it!!
>> Now we all have to do is eat it.
The last thing is Bibimbab.
>> correct!
Method making it is so simple.
>> The procedure is also very simple.
All ingredient I want to eat have to put in bowl and then mix them.
>> I just have to put all the ingredients that I want to eat in a bowl and mix them.
Isn\'t it easy?
>> correct!
Do you have any recommendation for Philippine food for me?
>> correct!
OR>> Could you recommend/suggest Filipino dishes for me?
I love kimchi, bibimbap and Tteokbokki (spicy rice cake). Yummy! If you come to the Philippines, you should try Adobo( this could be chicken or pork adobo or mix), Lechon ( roasted pig) , Sinigang (sour meat stew), and for dessert Halo Halo.
~T. Lynn
Kimchi is so popular that Korean people usually use Kimchi to cook the dishes.
>> Kimchi is so popular that Korean people usually use Kimchi to cook different dishes.
There are a few cuisines using Kimchi.
>> There are a few dishes using kimchi.
One of them is Kimchi soup that Korean people can easily enjoy everywhere.
>> correct!
Method cooking it is very simple because It needs only a few ingredients.
>> The method of cooking is very simple because it needs only a few ingredients.
Bulgogi also is very known to foreigners.
>> Bulgogi is also well-known to foreigners.
OR>> Bulgogi is also famous to foreigners.
To eat it deliciously, we have to prepare curry.
>> correct!
Balance Bulgogi and curry is so good!
>> The balance between bulgogi and curry is very good.
Method is simple.
>> The cooking procedure is very simple.
We first have to make curry and then only put Bulgogi on it.
>> First, we have to make curry then put bulgogi on it.
Now, all we have to do is eating it!!
>> Now we all have to do is eat it.
The last thing is Bibimbab.
>> correct!
Method making it is so simple.
>> The procedure is also very simple.
All ingredient I want to eat have to put in bowl and then mix them.
>> I just have to put all the ingredients that I want to eat in a bowl and mix them.
Isn\'t it easy?
>> correct!
Do you have any recommendation for Philippine food for me?
>> correct!
OR>> Could you recommend/suggest Filipino dishes for me?
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