THIS DISTORTED SOCIETY
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
You gave such strong opinions about this matter.
You are clearly affected by this news.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
When I knew that Sewol ferry was raised, I felt mixed emotions.
>> When I found out that Sewol ferry was raised, I felt mixed emotions.
Why did it take too much time?
>> CORRECT!
Why were people\'s opinions splitted if the ferry had to be refloated or not.
>> Why do people have polarizing opinions about whether the ferry should be raised or not?
Why was the tragic ship salvaged right after the impeachment of Park?
>> CORRECT!
There is Heinrich’s Law.
>> There is a thing called \"Heinrich\'s Law\".
It insists that near misses happen 300 times before a major incident and minor incidents happen 29 times before a major incident.
>> CORRECT!
We had a lot of chances to prevent this overwhelming catastrophe but safety ignorance and lack of common sense in our society made us not to catch the chances.
>> We had a lot of chances to prevent this overwhelming catastrophe, but safety ignorance and lack of common sense in our society made us miss the chances.
Even now, we must normalize this distorted society.
>> CORRECT!
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