This is a SMART PHONE.

I'm going to my home. How can I write this? Oh~ you may don't know smart phone. It is smart in various section. It gives us shrinking distance and saving time. Before I got this, I used to listen music with MP3 player. But now, I can use internet at anywhere. Of course, this has some problem. When I use this with taking bus, I have to concentrate on some task, and I feel not good at my stomach.

Hello Se Il! What a wonderful Monday isn't it?  You are doing great in our class so keep it up ok.  You take care always! See you! Monica I'm going to my home. How can I write this? >>>I'm going home(I'm on my way home).  How can I write this? Oh~ you may don't know smart phone. >>>Oh! You may not know a smart phone. >>>You may not be familiar with smart phones.  It is smart in various section. It gives us shrinking distance and saving time. >>>It is smart in various ways because it can shorten distances and saves us time.  Before I got this, I used to listen music with MP3 player. >>>correct But now, I can use internet at anywhere. >>>>But now, I can use the internet anywhere. Of course, this has some problem. >>>>correct  When I use this with taking bus, I have to concentrate on some task, and I feel not good at my stomach. >>>When I use this while on a bus,  I have to concentrate on some task, and I don't feel good in my stomach.