this is first homework~

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> What are your greatest professional strengths? Although I\'m still a graduating student, I believe that my skill in analyzing and model making; and my knowledge in computer software and programs that are needed to complete models or building base design and documentation are going to be incredibly beneficial in this program. My ability in analyzing the space and expertise about urban environment will help society address the issues facing it.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean~~

>> What are your greatest professional strengths?
Although I\'m still a graduating student, I believe that my skill in analyzing and model making; and my knowledge in computer software and programs that are needed to complete models or building base design and documentation are going to be incredibly beneficial in this program.

>> correct

My ability in analyzing the space and expertise about urban environment will help society address the issues facing it.

>> My ability in analyzing space and expertise on urban environment will help society address the issues it\'s facing.

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