this is free talking story next day
학생이 쓴 원문
I am parking lot nearby skhynix . I have a plan to go to my company. so I went to work by car.
if I go to my company by subway or bus. It take over 2 hours.
but if i take my car. It take over 1 hours.
my boss said me to come company today last friday.
my boss have a headache because company problem. I guess the problem is member of staff.
i think the member is team reader. maybe Main issue is his ability.
my boss want him to study new business. but he don`t like. my company is struggling because of corra-19. so we need new business.
I was comfortable until one month ago. but I was very tired because I maked new deal .
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Working is definitely not easy, huh? Good luck there!
- T. Beth
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I am parking lot nearby skhynix . >>> I am at the parking lot nearby SK-Hynix.
I have a plan to go to my company. so I went to work by car.
>>> I had a plan to go to my company so I went to work by car.
if I go to my company by subway or bus. It take over 2 hours.
>>> If I go to my company by subway or bus, it takes over 2 hours.
but if i take my car. It take over 1 hours.
>>> But if I take my car, it takes over an hour.
my boss said me to come company today last friday.
>>> My boss told me to come to the company today last Friday.
my boss have a headache because company problem.
>>> My boss has a headache because of a company problem.
I guess the problem is member of staff.
>>> I guess the problem is due to a member of the staff.
i think the member is team reader.
>>> I think the member is a team leader.
maybe Main issue is his ability.
>>> Maybe the main issue is his ability.
my boss want him to study new business. but he don`t like.
my boss want him to study new business. but he don`t like.
>>> My boss wants him to study a new business but he doesn\'t want to.
my company is struggling because of corra-19.
>>> My company is struggling because of CoVID-19.
so we need new business.
>>> So we need a new business.
I was comfortable until one month ago.
>>> correct
but I was very tired because I maked new deal .
>>> But I was very tired because I had to make new deals.
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