this is my homework

2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hllow Ms. [Name]! Always thank you about heard and gave me courage my awkward english! This is my homework today, in fact yesterday. 1. Dave had chocolate ice cream for dessert. 2. Since our class is so noisy, we couldn't hear Dave speaking. 3. I really need to lose some weight. 4. Since I lost so much weight, my pants are loose. 5. The capital of California is Sacramento. 6. You need to begin every sentence with a capital letter. 7. The Sahara desert is located in Africa. 8. Are all my students here? 9. Why does Dave always lose his socks? 10. You'll go to jail if you commit a capital offense. Have a nice day, sir!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Sir Steve! Thank you so much for your composition today! You are commendable for always doing your best in the class. Keep up the good work and don\'t give up! You can do it! Take care and have a nice day! T.JanE ^^ Hllow Ms. [Name]!>> Hello Ms. [Name]!Always thank you about heard and gave me courage my awkward english!>> Thank you for always listening to me and for encouraging me to speak in English.This is my homework today, in fact yesterday.>> Correct.1. Dave had chocolate ice cream for dessert.>> Correct. 2. Since our class is so noisy, we couldn\'t hear Dave speaking.>> Correct. 3. I really need to lose some weight.>> Correct. 4. Since I lost so much weight, my pants are loose.>> Correct. 5. The capital of California is Sacramento.>> Correct. 6. You need to begin every sentence with a capital letter.>> Correct. 7. The Sahara desert is located in Africa.>> Correct. 8. Are all my students here?>> Correct. 9. Why does Dave always lose his socks?>> Correct. 10. You\'ll go to jail if you commit a capital offense.>> Correct.Have a nice day, sir! >> Have a nice day, Ma\'am!

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