This is my homework

2012-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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How are you Aurora? I am sorry for submitting my homework late. Because I busied the work. 1.It's been raining at lunch time. 2.Sarah has lived in Paris from 1995. 3.Paul has lived in London during ten years. 4.I'm tired of waiting we've been sitting here while an hour. 5.Kevin has been looking for a job so he left school. 1.Both doors were closed. 2.John sat down and putting his books on the table. 3.This pen belongs to me. 4.Were Mary and Topm at the party last night? 5.There was nobody at home. He absenced to abrupt because abscessed. I can't impossible a problem. Thank you . See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Good day! Thank you for your time and effort in doing your homework. You did a good job on it. I know that you are quite busy at work but you did find a time to do it. I really appreciate it. I will talk to you tomorrow. Take care! ;-) ~T. Aurora~ Here are my corrections for you: How are you Aurora? >>CORRECTI am sorry for submitting my homework late. >>CORRECT Because I busied the work.>> I was too busy at work.1.It\'s been raining at lunch time.>>It\'s been raining since lunch time.2.Sarah has lived in Paris from 1995.>>Sarah has lived in Paris since 1995.3.Paul has lived in London during ten years.>>Paul has lived in London for ten years.4.I\'m tired of waiting we\'ve been sitting here while an hour.>>I\'m tired of waiting. We\'ve been sitting here for an hour.5.Kevin has been looking for a job so he left school.>>Kevin has been looking for a job since he left school. 1.Both doors were closed.>>CORRECT2.John sat down and putting his books on the table.>>John sat down and put his books on the table.3.This pen belongs to me.>>CORRECT4.Were Mary and Topm at the party last night?>>CORRECT5.There was nobody at home.>>CORRECT He absenced to abrupt because abscessed. >>His absence was abrupt because of the abscess.I can\'t impossible a problem.>>I can\'t solve the problem.Thank you . >>Thank you. See you tomorrow. >>CORRECT

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