this is my homework^^

2012-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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hi, teacher marie ^0^ this is my homework~ Find the meaning of the word and idiomatic expression below and use them in your own sentences. 1. ogle 2. Hot off the press News that is hot off the press has a lot of information. In today's hot topic is that the news about the man who ogled the woman was false report.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kayla! Great job here! I hope you make this a habit coz you really need to enhance your vocabulary bank. ^^ I\'m here to help you with that. If you didn\'t understand something here, just let me know okay? Good night! CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ hi, teacher marie ^0^ >> CORRECT OR >> Hi, Teacher Marie! ^^this is my homework~>> CORRECT OR >> This is my homework. *Observe proper capitalization. ^^News that is hot off the press has a lot of information. >> CORRECT In today\'s hot topic is that the news about the man who ogled the woman was false report. >> Today\'s hot topic is about the false report regarding the man who ogled at the woman. *This sentence is okay, but it might be better to add something more to justify why the man \'ogled\' at the woman. ^^

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