This is my homework that I promised with you!

Hello there, John! Happy Monday!

Thank you so much for sending me your homework. You did great! I just had to combine some of your sentences together to make them more complete.

Take care and see you later. =)

~Teacher Elisha

I believe that my skill in analysing data, creating database will be lots of beneficial in this job position.

>> I believe that my skills in analyzing data and creating database will be very beneficial to this job position.

 It is impossible to manage all the countless amounts of data. So, we can organize them through creating database and then interpret them through analyzing.

>>  It is impossible to manage all of the countless data, which is why we should organize them by creating a database and by interpreting them through analysis.

 That is the reason why I think so.

>> That why I think my skills are useful and important.

 Finally, I know that I always take the extra effort to learn more.

>> I am always willing to learn more and to put an extra effort in every task given to me.