This is my homework that I promised with you!

Hi John! Thank you for sending me your homework. =)

Regarding the first question, remember that they are asking about your weakness here. Try to talk about a professional trait, I think that would be better. When it comes to the second question, be more creative with your answer.

 Nonetheless, you did great. See you! ^^

~Teacher Elisha

<<1. What do you consider to be your weakness? >>
Some people feel that my outgoing personality is bothersome.

>> CORRECT!
 But, it is a strength point for me who communicate with follower.

>> But, I can communicate well with other team members.

or:

>> But, I can communicate well even as a follower.
 So I always try to use communication skills that don’t ruin his mood and don’t rude myself
>> I always try to use my communication skills to prevent ruining his mood and so that I won\'t appear to be rude.
<< 2. Where do you see yourself in 5 years?>>
I am very passionate about data analysis in my position

>> I am passionate about the job position as a data analyzer.
 So I intend to stay here for 5 or even more years

>> I intend to stay here for five years or more.
 I know that this job experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions in my future.

>> I know that this job experience will play an important role in helping me make important decisions for my future.