This is my homework that I promised with you!

2018-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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1. What are some of your short-term and long-term goals? As a data analyst, my short-term goal is to learn everything that I have to know about it and adapt to this company. And my long term goal is to gain more knowledge of analysing skill and inspire my fellow employees to be more efficient. Finally I want to be a expert of analysing data. 2. Tell me about a challenge or conflict you’ve faced at work (or school), and how you dealt with it. When I was first grade in college, I had to make presentation for announcing my project. And I was nervous because this was my first time to announce for many people. But I asked for help from my seniors and I realized this was nothing. I was able to finish the presentation successfully.

강사 첨삭

Hello, John! Thank you so much for doing your homework. =)

See you later! ~Teacher Elisha

1. What are some of your short-term and long-term goals?
As a data analyst, my short-term goal is to learn everything that I have to know about it and adapt to this company.

>> As a data analyst, my short-term goal is to learn everything that I need to learn about my position and to adapt to this company well.
 And my long term goal is to gain more knowledge of analysing skill and inspire my fellow employees to be more efficient.

>> My long term goal is to gain more knowledge about analyzing data and to inspire my fellow employees to be more efficient.
 Finally I want to be a expert of analysing data.

>> Finally, I want to be an expert in analyzing data.
 2. Tell me about a challenge or conflict you’ve faced at work (or school), and how you dealt with it.
When I was first grade in college, I had to make presentation for announcing my project.

>> When I was a freshman in college, I had to make a presentation to announce my project.

And I was nervous because this was my first time to announce for many people.

>> I was nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of many people.

But I asked for help from my seniors and I realized this was nothing. 

>> I asked for help from my seniors and I realized it was nothing.
I was able to finish the presentation successfully.

>> CORRECT!

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