This is my homework that I promised with you!
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~Teacher Elisha
1. When I was a freshman in college, I had to make a presentation to announce my project.
>> CORRECT!
I was nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of many people.
>> CORRECT!
So I asked for help from my seniors and they advised and me every first thing is to be realized it was nothing.
>> I asked for help from my seniors and they told me that there is first time for everything. That made me realize that it was nothing.
I took a deep breath and stayed calm.
>> CORRECT!
I knew that raising my voice and announcing my presentation accurately.
>> I raised my voice and presented accurately.
I was able to finish the presentation successfully.
>> CORRECT!
2. I am motivated by everyday competition among other students.
>> I am motivated by everyday competition among my coworkers.
This is the reason that I don\'t want to lose in my major.
>> This is the reason why I don\'t like losing.
In spite of having difficulties, I will still do my best in every task given to me.
>> In spite of having difficulties, I will still do my best in every task given to me.
3. I lead or follow depending on the situation.
>> I either lead or follow depending on the situation.
however I have to say that I am more of follower than leader.
>> However, I have to say that I am more of follower than leader.
Progressing in team project, I recommended someone to be leader who gave positive opinions.
>> Regarding team projects, I think someone who has positive opinions should be the leader.
And after, I didn\'t doubt my leader’s opinion.
>> In that case, I won\'t doubt my leader’s opinion.
and also I used to do my best every task given to me.
>> Also, I do my best every task given to me.
That personality make me good follower
>> My personality makes me a good follower.
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