This is my homework that I promised with you!

2018-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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1. When I was a freshman in college, I had to make a presentation to announce my project. I was nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of many people. So I asked for help from my seniors and they advised and me every first thing is to be realized it was nothing. I took a deep breath and stayed calm. I knew that raising my voice and announcing my presentation accurately. I was able to finish the presentation successfully. 2. I am motivated by everyday competition among other students. This is the reason that I don't want to lose in my major. In spite of having difficulties, I will still do my best in every task given to me. 3. I lead or follow depending on the situation. however I have to say that I am more of follower than leader. Progressing in team project, I recommended someone to be leader who gave positive opinions. And after, I didn't doubt my leader’s opinion. and also I used to do my best every task given to me. That personality make me good follower

강사 첨삭

Hello, John! Thank you for sending me your homework. See you! =)

~Teacher Elisha

1. When I was a freshman in college, I had to make a presentation to announce my project.

>> CORRECT!

I was nervous because it was my first time to speak in front of many people.

>> CORRECT!

So I asked for help from my seniors and they advised and me every first thing is to be realized it was nothing.

>> I asked for help from my seniors and they told me that there is first time for everything. That made me realize that it was nothing.

 I took a deep breath and stayed calm.

>> CORRECT!

I knew that raising my voice and announcing my presentation accurately.

>> I raised my voice and presented accurately.

I was able to finish the presentation successfully.

>> CORRECT!
 2. I am motivated by everyday competition among other students.

>>  I am motivated by everyday competition among my coworkers.

This is the reason that I don\'t want to lose in my major.

>> This is the reason why I don\'t like losing.

In spite of having difficulties, I will still do my best in every task given to me.

>> In spite of having difficulties, I will still do my best in every task given to me.
 3. I lead or follow depending on the situation.

>> I either lead or follow depending on the situation.

however I have to say that I am more of follower than leader.

>> However, I have to say that I am more of follower than leader.

Progressing in team project, I recommended someone to be leader who gave positive opinions.

>> Regarding team projects, I think someone who has positive opinions should be the leader.

 And after, I didn\'t doubt my leader’s opinion.

>> In that case, I won\'t doubt my leader’s opinion.

and also I used to do my best every task given to me.

>>  Also, I do my best every task given to me.

That personality make me good follower

>> My personality makes me a good follower.

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