This is my homework that I promised with you!

2018-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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<<Tell me about a time when you worked in a team. How did you contribute to the team’s success?>> When I was a senior in my college, I had to make a team for our project. Among them, I worked on data analysis and collection. some of my coworkers were much busier than others. While fulfilling the tasks assigned to me, I proactively supported my coworkers who were busier than I was. So we could finish our project in deadline and the team project was a huge success << What was your biggest failure? What did you learn from it?>> As you know, My field used to face many problem such as hard to find the data that I want to use or lose databases by computer error. Despite my endless efforts, I failed submission my project in deadline. After that event, I spent much of my free time learning about source code for collecting data. and also It make me have a habit of planning when I enter the project

강사 첨삭

Hello, John! You prepared your answers well. Great job! See you later! =)

~Teacher Elisha

<<Tell me about a time when you worked in a team. How did you contribute to the team’s success?>>
=> When I was a senior in my college, I had to make a team for our project.

>>  When I was a senior in college, I was a part of a team while working on a project.
 Among them, I worked on data analysis and collection.

>> My task was to analyze and to collect data.

some of my coworkers were much busier than others.

>> Some of my teammates were busier than the others.

While fulfilling the tasks assigned to me, I proactively supported my coworkers who were busier than I was.

>> While fulfilling the tasks assigned to me, I proactively supported my teammates who were busier than me.

So we could finish our project in deadline and the team project was a huge success
>> Because of this, we were able to finish the project before the deadline and our team\'s project was a huge success.
<< What was your biggest failure? What did you learn from it?>>
=> As you know, My field used to face many problem such as hard to find the data that I want to use or lose databases by computer error.

>> As you know, my field faces a lot of problems such as difficulties in finding some data or losing databases because of a computer error.

Despite my endless efforts, I failed submission my project in deadline.

>> Despite my endless effort, I failed to submit my project before the deadline.

After that event, I spent much of my free time learning about source code for collecting data.

>> After what happened, I spent my free time learning about the source code for data collection.

 and also It make me have a habit of planning when I enter the project

>> It also became my habit to plan everything before starting a project.

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