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~Teacher Elisha
<<Tell me about a time when you worked in a team. How did you contribute to the team’s success?>>
=> When I was a senior in my college, I had to make a team for our project.
>> When I was a senior in college, I was a part of a team while working on a project.
Among them, I worked on data analysis and collection.
>> My task was to analyze and to collect data.
some of my coworkers were much busier than others.
>> Some of my teammates were busier than the others.
While fulfilling the tasks assigned to me, I proactively supported my coworkers who were busier than I was.
>> While fulfilling the tasks assigned to me, I proactively supported my teammates who were busier than me.
So we could finish our project in deadline and the team project was a huge success
>> Because of this, we were able to finish the project before the deadline and our team\'s project was a huge success.
<< What was your biggest failure? What did you learn from it?>>
=> As you know, My field used to face many problem such as hard to find the data that I want to use or lose databases by computer error.
>> As you know, my field faces a lot of problems such as difficulties in finding some data or losing databases because of a computer error.
Despite my endless efforts, I failed submission my project in deadline.
>> Despite my endless effort, I failed to submit my project before the deadline.
After that event, I spent much of my free time learning about source code for collecting data.
>> After what happened, I spent my free time learning about the source code for data collection.
and also It make me have a habit of planning when I enter the project
>> It also became my habit to plan everything before starting a project.
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