This is my homework that I promised with you!

Hello, John! Thank you for sending me your homework. See you later! =)

~Teacher Elisha

<< What factors do you think will maintain your interest in this company>>
=> My passion to learn every task given to me will never bore me

>> My passion to learn from all of the tasks to be given to me will never bore me.
 If I enter your company, I will challenged to upgrade myself with the efforts.

>> If I enter your company, I will be challenged to  upgrade myself.
 I expect to find a lot of areas for personal growth and endless opportunities in this company.

>> CORRECT!
<< What is your dream job?>>
=> I want to be a data anlayst in the future.

>> CORRECT!

Because This work make me happy and excited.

>> This work makes me happy and excited.

and I promise that I will contribute to upgrade this field more professionally.

>> I will do my best to professionally contribute on upgrading this field.

 I’d like to manage my own company

>>  I’d like to manage my own company someday.