This is my homework that I promised with you!

2018-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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1. What other companies are you interviewing with? I don't have any other interviews aside from this one. I have been interested in data processing position. So when I had heard about your company and wanted to employ person who deal with data analyst, I was so excited that opportunities that. I’m most looking forward to this interview. 2. What sets you apart from the other candidates? I have to say that my strong and dependable character set me apart from the other candidates. For example, Having grace under pressure and keeping a genial smile on my face even during difficult and stressful times are some of my unique skills. I’m sure that these skills set me apart from the other candidates.

강사 첨삭

Hello, John! You prepared your answers well. You are doing an incredible job in answering all of the interview questions I give you. Keep it up! See you later. =)

~Teacher Elisha

1. What other companies are you interviewing with? 
=> I don\'t have any other interviews aside from this one.

>> CORRECT!

I have been interested in data processing position.

>> I have been interested in applying for data processing positions.

So when I had heard about your company and wanted to employ person who deal with data analyst, I was so excited that opportunities that.

>> So, when heard that your company wanted to employ a person who  can deal with data analysis, I was so excited to have for the opportunity.

I’m most looking forward to this interview.

>> CORRECT!
 2. What sets you apart from the other candidates?
=> I have to say that my strong and dependable character set me apart from the other candidates.

>>  I have to say that my strong and dependable character sets me apart from the other candidates.

For example, Having grace under pressure and keeping a genial smile on my face even during difficult and stressful times are some of my unique skills.

>> For example, having grace  while working under pressure and keeping a genial smile on my face even during difficult and stressful times are some of my unique skills.

 I’m sure that these skills set me apart from the other candidates. 

>> CORRECT!

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