This is my homework that I promised with you!
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Hello, John! You prepared your answers well. You are doing an incredible job in answering all of the interview questions I give you. Keep it up! See you later. =)
~Teacher Elisha
1. What other companies are you interviewing with?
=> I don\'t have any other interviews aside from this one.
>> CORRECT!
I have been interested in data processing position.
>> I have been interested in applying for data processing positions.
So when I had heard about your company and wanted to employ person who deal with data analyst, I was so excited that opportunities that.
>> So, when heard that your company wanted to employ a person who can deal with data analysis, I was so excited to have for the opportunity.
I’m most looking forward to this interview.
>> CORRECT!
2. What sets you apart from the other candidates?
=> I have to say that my strong and dependable character set me apart from the other candidates.
>> I have to say that my strong and dependable character sets me apart from the other candidates.
For example, Having grace under pressure and keeping a genial smile on my face even during difficult and stressful times are some of my unique skills.
>> For example, having grace while working under pressure and keeping a genial smile on my face even during difficult and stressful times are some of my unique skills.
I’m sure that these skills set me apart from the other candidates.
>> CORRECT!
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