This is my homework that I promised with you!

2018-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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1. What are your key skills? I'm confident that my communication and technical skills would best fit the position that I’m applying for. I’m sure that My communication skill make encourage our team for achieving goal. And technical skills that good at processing data will help to solve difficulty or unexpected problem. In conclusion, This skills will help to grow up your company 2. How do you handle unexpected events? If I face unexpected events, I will try to find Why this problem happened. This is the reason Why I always can solve my problem. Before find out my problem or reason of unexpected events, I have a time to relax myself and try to solve step by step. I’ve experienced a lot of difficult and unexpected situations and staying calm has helped me solve problem

강사 첨삭

Hello, John! Thank you for doing your homework! Keep up the good work. Your answers are improving. =)

~Teacher Elisha

1. What are your key skills?
=> I\'m confident that my communication and technical skills would best fit the position that I’m applying for.

>> CORRECT!

I’m sure that My communication skill make encourage our team for achieving goal.

>> I’m sure that my communication skill can encourage our team to achieve our goals.

And technical skills that good at processing data will help to solve difficulty or unexpected problem.

>> I also have the technical skills to process data which can help  solve difficulties or unexpected problems.

In conclusion, This skills will help to grow up your company
>> In conclusion, these skills will help your company grow.
2. How do you handle unexpected events?
=> If I face unexpected events, I will try to find Why this problem happened.

>>  If I face unexpected events, I will try to find out why these problems happened.

This is the reason Why I always can solve my problem.

>> This is why I can always  solve my problems.

Before find out my problem or reason of unexpected events, I have a time to relax myself and try to solve step by step.

>> Before finding out what caused the problems or the reasons why the unexpected events happened, I make sure to relax and to try to solve the problem step by step.

I’ve experienced a lot of difficult and unexpected situations and staying calm has helped me solve problem

>> I’ve experienced a lot of difficult and unexpected situations and staying calm has helped me solve my problems.

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