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Hello, John! Thank you for doing your homework! Keep up the good work. Your answers are improving. =)
~Teacher Elisha
1. What are your key skills?
=> I\'m confident that my communication and technical skills would best fit the position that I’m applying for.
>> CORRECT!
I’m sure that My communication skill make encourage our team for achieving goal.
>> I’m sure that my communication skill can encourage our team to achieve our goals.
And technical skills that good at processing data will help to solve difficulty or unexpected problem.
>> I also have the technical skills to process data which can help solve difficulties or unexpected problems.
In conclusion, This skills will help to grow up your company
>> In conclusion, these skills will help your company grow.
2. How do you handle unexpected events?
=> If I face unexpected events, I will try to find Why this problem happened.
>> If I face unexpected events, I will try to find out why these problems happened.
This is the reason Why I always can solve my problem.
>> This is why I can always solve my problems.
Before find out my problem or reason of unexpected events, I have a time to relax myself and try to solve step by step.
>> Before finding out what caused the problems or the reasons why the unexpected events happened, I make sure to relax and to try to solve the problem step by step.
I’ve experienced a lot of difficult and unexpected situations and staying calm has helped me solve problem
>> I’ve experienced a lot of difficult and unexpected situations and staying calm has helped me solve my problems.
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