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<< What would you do if one of our competitors offer you the same position but with higher compensation? >>
=> I would not accept their proposer.
>> I will not accept their proposal.
Because I think that the trust and assignment are more important than any other things.
>> I think trust and loyalty is more important.
If I already have a relationship with this company, I am sure that I would not betray our company.
>> If I already have a relationship with your company, I am sure that I would not betray you.
<< What type of work environment do you prefer? >>
=> I prefer to work in pleasant atmosphere.
>> CORRECT!
In my major, I think anlaysing data position always need communicate with co-worker.
>> In my thoughts, data analysts always need to communicate with their co-workers.
because result made by individual opinions is not a good analysis.
>> A result made by a single person\'s opinion is not a good analysis.
For this, pleasant and cheerful environment will help to communicate well
>> Due to this, a pleasant and cheerful environment will help me communicate well.
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