This is my homework that I promised with you!
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Happy Friday, John! Thank you for sending me your homework. Your sentences are good, I just had to do some minor corrections. Great job and see you later! ~Teacher Elisha
<< Describe a professional skill that you’ve developed in your most recent job. >>
=> When I worked in Korean technical institution, I could learn collecting data efficiently.
>> When I worked at Korean Technical Institution, I have learned how to collect data efficiently.
And also learn about managing time in deadline
>> I have also learned how to manage my time to meet the deadline.
<< What personal skills or work habits have you struggled to improve? >>
=> When I was fresh man in college, I couldn\'t control my schedule what I was planning.
>> When I was a freshman in college, I could not follow my schedule as planned.
however, now that I have learned how to balance my time between work, family and friends. I have no trouble keeping track of everything.
>> However, now that I have learned how to balance my time between work, family and friends, I have no trouble keeping track of everything.
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