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This article is about recent offensive takeover bids of the U.K. firms, especially Kraft’s acquisition over Cadbury. The way short-term Cadbury investors made a deal is pointed out, letting the Cadbury plant in Keynsham shut down unexpectedly. With the worries of being British as a takeover capital of Europe, the U.K. Takeover Panel takes some actions in order to make deals tougher for acquirers to accept. One is a proposal to higher the threshold of voting rights for an acquisition more than 60%, and the other is disenfranchising short-term investors’ rights. Both has its weak point, but the City makes certain of making a change on the basis of long-term-shareholder value rather than short-term speculation on this takeover issue.

Hello Joan, I'm glad to receive a composition from you.  It shows how diligent you  are as a student.  Keep it up! Enjoy the holidays. See you on Friday. Love, Verna   Here are my corrections for you. This article is about recent offensive takeover bids of the U.K. firms, especially Kraft’s acquisition over Cadbury. >>This article is about the recent offensive takeover bids of the U.K. firms, especially Kraft's acquisition of Cadbury. The way short-term Cadbury investors made a deal is pointed out, letting the Cadbury plant in Keynsham shut down unexpectedly.  >>Correct With the worries of being British as a takeover capital of Europe, the U.K. Takeover Panel takes some actions in order to make deals tougher for acquirers to accept. >>With the worries of having British as a takeover capital of Europe, the U.K. takeover panel takes some actions in order to make deals tougher for acquirers to accept. One is a proposal to higher the threshold of voting rights for an acquisition more than 60%, and the other is disenfranchising short-term investors’ rights.  >> One is a proposal to make the threshold of voting rights higher for an acquisition more than 60%, and the other is disenfranchising short-term investors' rights.  Both has its weak point, but the City makes certain of making a change on the basis of long-term-shareholder value rather than short-term speculation on this takeover issue. >>Both has its weak point, but the City makes certain of making a change on the basis of long-term-shareholder's value rather than short-term speculation on this takeover issue.