This is [Name]-chi Jeon
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jade
I told you that I have eaten Kim-chi Jeon for my dinner.
Do you remember?
I could't explane it, so I show you the picture
http://board.miznet.daum.net/gaia/do/cook/recipe/mizr/read?articleId=15193&bbsId=MC001
This is [Name] chi Jeon recipe.
Do you see the finished-cooking?
Its shape looks like a pizza, right? ^^
But It is cooked with frying pan not oven.
And It can make very variously as which you choose ingredient.
But main ingredient must be always Kim-chi.
I wish you could eat that
And I'm very happy to see you
I'm so excited to talk with you
Before I recieved your call, I was very depressed and exhausted.
But I got your call, the more I'm talkng to you
the more I have energy.
I really appreciate to you
Have a good evening!
See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Glad to have you back too!! Been really a long time.^^ Yeah, I have seen the food. Looked like pizza really. lol! I think it is quite easy to cook. I have kimchi at home. I think I can cook it.
I will call you again soon!!!
---jade---
Hi JadeI told you that I have eaten Kim-chi Jeon for my dinner.
>>correct Do you remember?
>>correct
>>>>If you remember I said I had Kim-chi Jean for diner. I could't explane it, so I show you the picture
>>I cannot describe it to you that is why I tried to look fo a picture to show you. http://board.miznet.daum.net/gaia/do/cook/recipe/mizr/read?articleId=15193&bbsId=MC001This is Kim chi Jeon recipe.
>>This the recipe for Kim-chi Jeon. Do you see the finished-cooking?
>>Can you see the cooked food?Its shape looks like a pizza, right? ^^
>>It is shaped like a pizza. But It is cooked with frying pan not oven.
>>But it is coked in a frying pan not in the oven. And It can make very variously as which you choose ingredient.
>>It can b cooked in various ways, as o how you like it. But main ingredient must be always Kim-chi.
>>But the main ingredient I kimchi. I wish you could eat that>>I wish you'll be ale to taste it. And I'm very happy to see you
I'm so excited to talk with you
>>And, I am very happy to talk to you again. Before I received your call, I was very depressed and exhausted.
>>Correct But I got your call, the more I'm talking to you the more I have energy.
>>but while I was talking to you, I became more and more energetic. I really appreciate to you
>>I really appreciate it.
>> I really thank you. Have a good evening!
>>Correct See you tomorrow!
>>Correct
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