This is [Name]-chi Jeon

2010-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

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Hi Jade I told you that I have eaten Kim-chi Jeon for my dinner. Do you remember? I could't explane it, so I show you the picture http://board.miznet.daum.net/gaia/do/cook/recipe/mizr/read?articleId=15193&bbsId=MC001 This is [Name] chi Jeon recipe. Do you see the finished-cooking? Its shape looks like a pizza, right? ^^ But It is cooked with frying pan not oven. And It can make very variously as which you choose ingredient. But main ingredient must be always Kim-chi. I wish you could eat that And I'm very happy to see you I'm so excited to talk with you Before I recieved your call, I was very depressed and exhausted. But I got your call, the more I'm talkng to you the more I have energy. I really appreciate to you Have a good evening! See you tomorrow!

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[이름], Glad to have you back too!! Been really a long time.^^ Yeah, I have seen the food. Looked like pizza really. lol! I think it is quite easy to cook. I have kimchi at home. I think I can cook it. I will call you again soon!!! ---jade--- Hi JadeI told you that I have eaten Kim-chi Jeon for my dinner. >>correct Do you remember? >>correct >>>>If you remember I said I had Kim-chi Jean for diner. I could't explane it, so I show you the picture >>I cannot describe it to you that is why I tried to look fo a picture to show you. http://board.miznet.daum.net/gaia/do/cook/recipe/mizr/read?articleId=15193&bbsId=MC001This is Kim chi Jeon recipe. >>This the recipe for Kim-chi Jeon. Do you see the finished-cooking? >>Can you see the cooked food?Its shape looks like a pizza, right? ^^ >>It is shaped like a pizza. But It is cooked with frying pan not oven. >>But it is coked in a frying pan not in the oven. And It can make very variously as which you choose ingredient. >>It can b cooked in various ways, as o how you like it. But main ingredient must be always Kim-chi. >>But the main ingredient I kimchi. I wish you could eat that>>I wish you'll be ale to taste it. And I'm very happy to see you I'm so excited to talk with you >>And, I am very happy to talk to you again. Before I received your call, I was very depressed and exhausted. >>Correct But I got your call, the more I'm talking to you the more I have energy. >>but while I was talking to you, I became more and more energetic. I really appreciate to you >>I really appreciate it. >> I really thank you. Have a good evening! >>Correct See you tomorrow! >>Correct

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