This is not an essay..

Hey [이름] Ha, thank you for the effort of sending this. I appreciate you writing this short essay. Yes, I will be giving you topics everyday. You can check the HOMEWORK I give you in the class evaluation. When you log-in the website, you will see your class evaluation there. You will see there pronunciation corrections, grammar corrections and my greeting to you. Below the greeting, I write there the topics for the homework essay. You can check the topics there everyday. Have a good day. See you next class!

-T. Beth

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It\'s my first time for submitting essay.

>> It\'s my first time submitting an essay.

But because there is no topic given to me, coming up with any subject is quite difficult to me.

>> But because there wasn\'t any topic given, coming up with any subject is quite difficult for me.

>> OR: There was no topic given to me and I find it quite difficult coming up with a subject to talk about.

So pleae determine any topic or issues for this homework if it won\'t burden you.

>> So please give me a topic or any issue for this homework if it\'s not burdensome to you.

Then i will be able to do this homework more actively.

>> Then I would actively do this homework.

>> OR: Then I would be more active doing this homework.

>> OR: Then I would be able to do this homework efficiently.

And in this non-meaningful text, there must be incorrect or to-be corrected expression, so please correct them this time.

>> In this meaningless text, there must be incorrect expressions that need to be corrected. Please correct them this time.

>> OR: In this insignificant passage, there are probably wrong expressions that need to be corrected. Please correct them this time.

This is end of my first essay.

>> This is the end of my first essay.