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I heard about Before the Flood right after it came out. However, I wasn\'t interested in our environment, and so I didn\'t watch it then. It was two years ago when I watched this movie. I did a project at school whoch was about climate change. I remember then clearly because the presenter of Before the Flood is Leonardo DiCaprio. The theme of this documentary is our environment and climate change. It devastates the effects of climate change, and how we can solve this problem. The presenter meets leading experts all working to create sustainable future. One of the most impressive scenes was when DiCaprio meets Michael E. Mann. He tells us that because fossil fuels make profits to companies, and politicians get donations from companies, it is hard to hope a change from politics. Through this movie, I learned that though I am only one person, I should make a change in my lifestyle and find out what I can do for our Earth.
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Hi [이름]. Great Job for this essay. Awesome work!
- T. Gabby :)
I heard about Before the Flood right after it came out.
>> I heard about the movie entitled Before The Flood right after it was shown on cinemas.
However, I wasn\'t interested in our environment, and so I didn\'t watch it then.
>> Correct.
It was two years ago when I watched this movie.
>> Correct.
I did a project at school which was about climate change.
>> Correct.
I remember then clearly because the presenter of Before the Flood is Leonardo DiCaprio.
>> I remember it clearly because the presenter of Before the Flood is Leonardo DiCaprio.
The theme of this documentary is our environment and climate change.
>> The theme of this documentary is our environment and the climate change
It devastates the effects of climate change, and how we can solve this problem.
>> Correct.
The presenter meets leading experts all working to create sustainable future.
>> Correct.
One of the most impressive scenes was when DiCaprio meets Michael E. Mann.
>> Correct.
He tells us that because fossil fuels make profits to companies, and politicians get donations from companies, it is hard to hope a change from politics.
>> He tells us that because fossil fuels make profits to companies, and politicians get donations from companies, it is hard for politics to be changed.
Through this movie, I learned that though I am only one person, I should make a change in my lifestyle and find out what I can do for our Earth.
>> Correct.
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