This is what I think about tattoos.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t think of tattoos as bad, or as good.
Because tattoos are their freedom and I don’t think I have to think about it.
And when I see somebody with lot of tattoos, I was a little scared at first, but now I don’t feel anything. Because more and more people are getting tattoos these days. And perceptions are changing a lot now in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don’t think of tattoos as bad, or as good.
>>> CORRECT!
Because tattoos are their freedom and I don’t think I have to think about it.
>>> Because getting tattoos is their freedom to do so and I don’t think I have to think about it.
And when I see somebody with lot of tattoos, I was a little scared at first, but now I don’t feel anything.
>>> And when I see somebody with a lot of tattoos, I was a little scared at first, but now I don’t feel anything.
Because more and more people are getting tattoos these days.
>>> CORRECT!
And perceptions are changing a lot now in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
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