This time of the lunar new year\'s day is good to me as I think.
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This time of hollydays is a bit meaningful to me because I spent the day with my family.
>> This time is a bit meaningful to me because I spent the day with my family.
In older days I went to the my relatives\' house to make a ritual greeting of the new year and to receive the blessing.
>> I went to my relative\'s house to have a greeting ritual for the new year for us to receive more blessings.
But the time has passes by and the surrounding of mine changed a lot.
>> However, as time passes by, my surroundings change.
And I am growing up now.
>> I am a grown man now.
I want to see the full moon in accordance of upcoming the new day.
>> I want to see the full moon in accordance with the upcoming new day.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
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