This time's question is more preferrable among these days' question.

2018-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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The memorable vacation,you said it,or questioned about it. It's interesting subject for me to talk about, I mean, not boring. I am spending a bit of busy days like as I am fully grown up like a adult person who earn a own money for a living. I don't know what the money is.. I am so childish as I think or too boyish as I talk it more progessively. If I said something about my memorable vacation, Hm. It is almost vanishing behind my memories. I think I am already an adult..^.^ Just kidding for a joke. I cann't speak about it at once what you asked right now. I am now reading a english novel written by agatha christy. It's as same as my vacation. I am well reading it under a cool air conditioner operated for free. It's really cool. Meet at saturday when you call me. till that time, Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean




The memorable vacation,you said it,or questioned about it.

>> Are you asking me about my most memorable vacation?


 It\'s interesting subject for me to talk about, I mean, not boring.

>> It\'s an interesting subject for me to talk about.


 I am spending a bit of busy days like as I am fully grown up like a adult person who earn a own money for a living.

>> My days are busy as I\'m an adult who has to work for a living.


 I don\'t know what the money is.. I am so childish as I think or too boyish as I talk it more progessively.

>> I don\'t full understand what money is all about and I feel immature to talk about it more progressively.


 If I said something about my memorable vacation, Hm. It is almost vanishing behind my memories. I think I am already an adult..^.^ 

>> I can\'t remember my most memorable vacation as my memory isn\'t as sharp as when I was younger.


 Just kidding for a joke.

>> I\'m just kidding.


 I cann\'t speak about it at once what you asked right now.

>> I don\'t know how to answer this question.


 I am now reading a english novel written by agatha christy. It\'s as same as my vacation. I am well reading it under a cool air conditioner operated for free. It\'s really cool. 

>> I am now reading an English novel written by Agatha Christy. It\'s the same as my vacation. I can read it well since I\'m in a place with a good air conditioning system. It\'s really cool.


 Meet at saturday when you call me.

>> Meet you on Saturday when you call me. [We don\'t have a class on Saturday so this sentence is a bit confusing.^^]


till that time, Bye.

>> Till that time. Cheers!

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