This time's question is more preferrable among these days' question.
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Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
The memorable vacation,you said it,or questioned about it.
>> Are you asking me about my most memorable vacation?
It\'s interesting subject for me to talk about, I mean, not boring.
>> It\'s an interesting subject for me to talk about.
I am spending a bit of busy days like as I am fully grown up like a adult person who earn a own money for a living.
>> My days are busy as I\'m an adult who has to work for a living.
I don\'t know what the money is.. I am so childish as I think or too boyish as I talk it more progessively.
>> I don\'t full understand what money is all about and I feel immature to talk about it more progressively.
If I said something about my memorable vacation, Hm. It is almost vanishing behind my memories. I think I am already an adult..^.^
>> I can\'t remember my most memorable vacation as my memory isn\'t as sharp as when I was younger.
Just kidding for a joke.
>> I\'m just kidding.
I cann\'t speak about it at once what you asked right now.
>> I don\'t know how to answer this question.
I am now reading a english novel written by agatha christy. It\'s as same as my vacation. I am well reading it under a cool air conditioner operated for free. It\'s really cool.
>> I am now reading an English novel written by Agatha Christy. It\'s the same as my vacation. I can read it well since I\'m in a place with a good air conditioning system. It\'s really cool.
Meet at saturday when you call me.
>> Meet you on Saturday when you call me. [We don\'t have a class on Saturday so this sentence is a bit confusing.^^]
till that time, Bye.
>> Till that time. Cheers!
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