This year.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been developing a program for 3 years. The program\'s name is SCAT-D. SCAT-D is a S/W for gathering data from machines or factories. The data which was gathered by SCAT-D can be base data for AI solution. My boss and I have tried to spread SCAT-D. I had meeting with some companies to tell a know-how about how to sell SCAT-D in the last business trip. Many big factories start to adopt AI(artificial intelligence) solution. So, this year is a great chance to spread our solution.
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I have been developing a program for 3 years.
>> I have been developing a program for 3 years now.
The program\'s name is SCAT-D. SCAT-D is a S/W for gathering data from machines or factories.
>> The program\'s name is SCAT-D. SCAT-D is an S/W for gathering data from machines or factories.
The data which was gathered by SCAT-D can be base data for AI solution.
>> The data which was gathered by SCAT-D can be the base data for an AI solution.
My boss and I have tried to spread SCAT-D.
>> Correct.
I had meeting with some companies to tell a know-how about how to sell SCAT-D in the last business trip.
>> I had a meeting with some companies to spread the \"know-how\" about how to sell SCAT-D on the last business trip.
Many big factories start to adopt AI(artificial intelligence) solution.
>> Many big factories started to adopt AI(artificial intelligence) solutions.
So, this year is a great chance to spread our solution.
>> So, this year is a great chance to spread out our solution to people.
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