This year is the tiger's year
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy new year
This year is the tiger's year by Korean old philosophy
There is an old story in Korea
In a long time ago,
12 animals run in the race
As a result of the race,
the arrival order is following.
The first animal is mouse,
and then cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey,
chicken, dog, pig.
By the order
last year is the cow's year,
this year is the tiger's year
Is there the same story in Philiphine?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Happy New Year too!!
Yeah, this year is the Year of the Tiger. I was born on the Year of the Rabbit?How about you?
Actually, I haven't heard of any story like that here in the Philippines but we do follow Chinese philosophy such as Astrology and Horoscopes?lt;o:p>
I hope this year will bring more blessings to you and your family?lt;/FONT>
XOXOXO
T. Shy
Here are my corrections:
This year is the tiger's year by Korean old philosophy>> This year is the tiger's year by the Korean old philosophyThere is an old story in Korea>> CORRECT
In a long time ago,>> A long time ago
12 animals run in the race>> 12 animals had a race
As a result of the race, the arrival order is following.>> As a result of the race, the order of arrival is as follows
The first animal is mouse, and then cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, pig.
>> CORRECT (but you have to include some articles like the?
>> The first animal is the mouse, and then the cow, tiger, rabbit, dragon, snake, horse, sheep, monkey, chicken, dog, and the pig.
By the order>> You can just eliminate this phrase, it is not necessary.
last year is the cow's year, this year is the tiger's year>> CORRECTIs there the same story in Philiphine?
>> Is there any story like this in the Philippines?
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.