Thomas Carlyle
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\"I\'ve got a great ambition to die of exhaustion rather than boredom\" said Thomas Carlyle. He means dying of exhaustion is better than idling away. He wanted people to work hard to improve their lives. When I was young, I thought so too. I also had an aspiration to die after consuming my whole body and mind. I wanted to work hard not to leave any regrets or anything unresolved. As I was older, however, I realized that life needs some relaxation like leisure, meditation or even doing nothing ~
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\"I\'ve got a great ambition to die of exhaustion rather than boredom\" said Thomas Carlyle.
>> \"I have a great ambition to die of exhaustion rather than boredom,\" Thomas Carlyle said.
He means dying of exhaustion is better than idling away.
>> He means that dying from exhaustion is preferable to sitting still.
He wanted people to work hard to improve their lives.
>> He wanted people to work hard in order to improve their lives.
When I was young, I thought so too.
>> I used to believe the same thing when I was younger.
I also had an aspiration to die after consuming my whole body and mind.
>> Correct!
I wanted to work hard not to leave any regrets or anything unresolved.
>> Correct!
OR: I was determined not to have any regrets or unresolved issues.
OR: I was determined not to have any regrets or unresolved issues.
As I was older, however, I realized that life needs some relaxation like leisure, meditation or even doing nothing ~
>> Correct!
OR: However, as I grew older, I realized that life requires some relaxation, such as leisure, meditation, or even doing nothing.
OR: However, as I grew older, I realized that life requires some relaxation, such as leisure, meditation, or even doing nothing.
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