though//nevertheless

2010-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Hi, dear Lei. But I need to explain more about the underlined words below to you. >> Though, they did’nt give.... What’s good is that the German government and their people fully apologized for the Japanese’ mistakes... 1. During W.W. II, German killed about 6 million Jews in the notorious concentration camps and destroyed the countries in Europe. Therefore that is not for the Japanese’ mistakes, but for theirs. My having skipped the necessary words led you misundrstand. I thought it was for granted that you knew enough about their atrocity and wrong deeds in the War. Sorry, lei. 2. I started to write with “nevertheless”, but you corrected with ” Though”, I hope your further explanation about why it is improper. May blessings!

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [Name]! I am so sorry for misunderstanding you again. ^^

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