Three Bad Things about Amusement Parks
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There are three bad things about amusement parks. First, the price is unreasonable. Because of the characteristic of the spot, all products and food are expensive, even if customers can buy the very same thing and food outside. Second, the likelihood of an accident is very high compared to other leisure activities. Some people might say that the possibility of an accident riding the roller coaster is lower than that of a car crash; however, it is still higher than other comfortable leisure activities such as going to a movie theater. Third, most of the amusement parks provide little zoo to users. As many people already knew about lots of disadvantages that zoo inflicts to animals, it can be also applied to the amusement park if it includes a zoo. For example, animals get stressed while people watching them, and they are infringed on their freedom of roaming around in big places since they are locked in a little cage. In conclusion, amusement parks are awful based on three reasons.
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. ^^
That\'s quite true!
It\'s a pretty scary and expensive place and they should work on making it better for everyone. ^^
~t. Ally
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There are three bad things about amusement parks.
>> CORRECT!
First, the price is unreasonable. Because of the characteristic of the spot, all products and food are expensive, even if customers can buy the very same thing and food outside.
>> CORRECT!
Second, the likelihood of an accident is very high compared to other leisure activities.
>> CORRECT!
Some people might say that the possibility of an accident riding the roller coaster is lower than that of a car crash; however, it is still higher than other comfortable leisure activities such as going to a movie theater.
>> Some people might say that the possibility of an accident from riding the roller coaster is lower than that of a car crash; however, it is still higher than other comfortable leisure activities such as going to a movie theater.
Third, most of the amusement parks provide little zoo to users.
>> Third, most of the amusement parks provide little zoos for users.
As many people already knew about lots of disadvantages that zoo inflicts to animals, it can be also applied to the amusement park if it includes a zoo.
>> As many people already knew about lots of disadvantages that zoos inflicts to animals, it can also be applied to the amusement park if it includes a zoos.
For example, animals get stressed while people watching them, and they are infringed on their freedom of roaming around in big places since they are locked in a little cage.
>> For example, animals get stressed while people are watching them, and they are infringed on their freedom of roaming around in big places since they are locked in a little cage.
In conclusion, amusement parks are awful based on three reasons.
>> In conclusion, amusement parks are awful based on these three reasons.
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